nice
good shit man. got me groovin. I think you needed a little bit more variety 3/4's through the song. some nice effects, mixing I can't comment on, because im listening on extremely bad headphones. this is a really solid track, im just unsure why its posted on newgrounds?
Wow, axeFX!? Didn't see that coming, i'm a big fan of yours.
Really thanks man! I'm not very good at giving my songs more varity without making it sound like it's a completely different song.
"this is a really solid track, im just unsure why its posted on newgrounds?"
I take that as a compliment, thanks again =)
this....
this song is fucking beautiful
TIME!
ITS TIME I TAKE CONTROL. IM SO PROUD OF YOU AND YOU
lovely
The melody is very nice. I like how it progresses. There's a fair amount of harmonics, with plenty of movement to keep me interested. Some good percussion, although in the more quieter parts of the song, I found the rim hits a tad distracting. Nice beat variation, and different drums for different sections, worked well.
Your sound effects near the middle certainly changed the mood of the song, although I found the contrast a bit too much. I would make them a little bit more suttle, or work on the transition a little bit.
The buildup was superb. It really brought life into the track. I can hear the effort and emotion you put into this track, it really shows.
For the record, I really don't know much of anything about ambient / IDM, I'm just typing my thoughts :)
Best of luck to you, man.
i hated it
Your kick is clipping, your volume levels are way out of whack. OW FUCK. You have no distinct melody at all, its random and bad. sorry. You need some serious practice, dude
:-D
Nice one man, the mixing is definitely better. Considering it's dance, I would of cut it a little shorter at 3 - 4 minutes. Still think this melody is really nice, but it would be more fitting in trance :P Great song dude, besides the snare roll seeming a bit random, there's nothing I can see wrong with this track. You get my 5/5 and 10/10
oh hell yes
Anything golden sun is an instant 10 and 5... but this track definitely deserves it. There was a bit too much noise in some of the synths, and a few transitions were a little sudden... but this is just what ive been looking for. Fived, tenned, favourited and downloaded. Very nice, man
wooo
not too bad man, you had some nice synths. I think you need a better kick drum sample, and you need to put some more hi hats in there. Neat melodys tho, the effects were pretty good and it was structured well. Keep workin on it man, I liked it.
well thanks
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